Use the following steps as a model for writing a story. Not exactly to fit into this story, but as a model or template to build the next stories I want to write.
Title of the model: THE WISDOM BIZ STORY
You were unsettled (deep pain)
Something significant happened (magical/sage)
You discovered/uncovered a truth (lesser known to audience/sets them free)
You had massive insight (becomes your IP)
You see things others don’t (what they pay for)
Your life is desirable because of that (why they buy from you)